Re: [kitten] Ben Campbell's No Objection on draft-ietf-kitten-pkinit-alg-agility-05: (with COMMENT)
Ben Campbell writes:
> Hi, thanks for this work. I only have a couple of editorial comments:
> - Abstract and Introduction: Please expand PKINIT on first mention in both the
> abstract and body.
> §4: "... implementations conforming to this specification can OPTIONALLY send
> back a list of supported CMS types ..."
> OPTIONALLY is not a defined keywords. I suggest changing "... can OPTIONALLY
> ..." to "MAY" Plural disagreement between "implementations" and "a list".
Hi Ben, thanks for taking a look!
Greg was kind enough to push a new version (-06) to the datatracker that
hopefully addresses your concerns.